This update is indeed a step in the right direction :)
The first thing to say I find missing is that along with the line "includes in-app purchases", to really help avoid bad surprises, there is absolutely the need for an "includes DRMs" or "This game requires constant connection" line.
Less importantly, the lines in Play should have been more instead of less: vertical scroll instead of horizontal (grid-like) would have been an improvement imo.

