The game starts out with the guy saying "Jasmine darling, I am coming". I instantly got the impression that he was going to follow her in death. But we soon find out she is being held captive. If you were not trying to force this assumption then perhaps "Jasmine darling, I am doing this for you" would be more fitting? Written any other way would further make it feel like death is the only outcome. IE "Jasmine darling, I'll be with you soon" "Jasmine darling, we will be together soon" "Jasmine darling, this will save us". etc...
There is a typo after he spins the barrel. "..each click feels like my heat skipped a beat"